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English is an accepted worldwide language. To improve sales and customer satisfaction, it is most important to use proper business English. Spelling errors, incorrect punctuation and wrong word choices can reflect poorly on your company and products. Miles Loretta understands the technical issues and has experience in rewriting translated English into concise business English. Here are some examples of improved text: |
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The casting mainframe with crossing and closing box ribs to get most stronger construction and static accurately. | The main base casting is closed cell with cross ribbing for better static accuracy. |
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To satisfy the different marketing,the basic construction is same and changing the ball screws, control, telescopic cover or spindle unit only,then to get different performance | To satisfy changing marketing needs, the basic construction is modular. The machines performance is improved by changing only the ball screws, controller, telescopic cover and spindle unit. |
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us to discuss your company’s technical writing needs. (864) 271-9334 or info@pma-sc.com |
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